did the project hear and the it was under number order 81661693 and then i order some improvement on it under order number 81674387 and now my Dr send me he need some more improvement and thees are the comment
Introduction â€“ could be better â€¦ include proper references for each of the topics included â€“ still missing Quality of services, Quality in tourism
Â· Lit review â€“ the topics should be introduced broader including proper references for each of them â€“ still missing references/citations;
Â· Research work â€“ use more of the SPC tool we have discussed during our classes, use Fishbone to search for the causes â€“ include Specification limits, calculate Cp, use Fishbone, Pareto;
Discussion â€“ has to be rewritten, as it is now is rather presentation and analysis of the results; you have to discuss your results in the light of other results found by other authors â€“ not good enough,
You have to include more citations of other authors and discuss your results in comparison to their results/ideas/findings;
Â· Conclusion â€“ short overview of the whole project â€“ still missing.
so please take care of my order and do the best i have to do as my Dr want it to pass
i attached the prevues paper
please color the new writing to know where is it.
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